Stop
Think
Confusion
Can I read what’s
Inside?
I dig at the dirt
But only to find
Another layer
Do I proceed?
Can I proceed?
I hesitate at the ambiguity
Frightened of what
might
be there
I long to know
But fear to find out
Still,
I press on-
Feeling through the dark
At the agitated bumps
It itches
Scratches
Chafes
And I realize
My ignorance
Was heaven
Tuesday, May 24, 2005
Heaven . . .
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3 comments:
I like this one a lot -- it's got a lot of layers, kind of like what it's about. The edits came out great too. And I still love that last line. good work man!
hey wow i just noticed the intense similarities in the last three lines of this poem and the last one.... cool.
you're so right han! wow. thats so intense right now. Anyway, I'm a big big fan of this one. BIG fan. In fact, I think I may go start a "Lina's Poetry is Flipping Awesome" Club. Han and Gabe would join... right?
okay.. I'm lame. But no more time for lame comments because a) I feel like crap right now (health wise, mind you) and b) Collide just came on and I have the inexplicable urge to dance that I just can't ignore.
I love you!
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