“Why can’t I do both?”
“How odd” I think. Bewildered, I reach in for it’s pair which has written on it:“Where to?” and “Do I have to decide?”
“Interesting” I think. I then move through the pile to come upon a pair of jeans. They’re old and worn, but the most comfortable to wear. Around the ankles are two sentences:“Who does he think he is?”
and
“Hold me.”
I give an exasperated sigh and throw them into the dryer. I then pick up five shirts. This time one word is smudged on each of their backs.and
“Hold me.”
“who” “will” “love” “me” “today?”
I then pick up my school jacket, only to find the word:“Me”
I giggle as I throw all of these into the black cylinder hole. I then pick up a pair of dance pants.“Overused”
After that, I pick up the tights. They seemed familiar yet from a distant dream. As I run my hands over their threads the sounds of crickets and the smell of must and sweat come to my mind. I then find the words:“Use me”
I throw them in the washer and I shake my head as I reach for my cup of tea on the edge of the washer. I go to take a swig, but it’s empty. I give a half smile and go back to my wash. There’s only one thing left in the pile now, it’s rolled up into a ball. I venture further, slowly uncoiling each layer. It’s my favorite sweatshirt. I smile remembering the warmth I felt when it was worn. I turn it over and on the back are 2 simple words:“Wake up”
Perplexed by such an odd ending to my laundry’s story, I crumple the sweatshirt back up, throw it in the dryer. I pause for a few secondsBut then quickly shake away the thoughts.
I press start.


6 comments:
WOW!
lina this is...amazing
i loved it because its such a great way to put everything youre feeling into words. This was so good. i dunno what to say so that youll know that i loved it but heres the thing
i got it right away like i understood!
keep it up and keep that chin up too
itll all be better soon
I LOVE YOU!
iz
wow, Lina. And your mom said you weren't deep! That was a really fantastic piece of writing; everything about it was well thought out and meant something to the story as a whole. And it really hit home, too, in a dreamlike sort of way. I'm really blown away by this, seriously.
so i've decided you should make all the things you write in your blog into a book. called Lina.
i liked this. personally, i love when you get clothes out of the dryer and they're all warm, and they actually SMELL fluffy, so having a special connection with the waching machine and all, i gotta say i've thoroughly enjoyed this. it captured that whole thing and tied it into...well, you know. after all, you wrote it.
Lina, this is incredible. Maybe my favorite peice of your work ever.
And this is realism. Because everything you pulled out of the washer was more real than every "real" peice of clothing you own.
BRILLIANT!!! wha' a brillian' s'ory there bloke!
::i am an american::
sorry, it was a long week filled with that.
but seriously nice work
Lina, this is AMAZING!!!! What a fantastic piece...I am in awe!
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