Monday, February 20, 2006

See Jane Run

Ok if you guys actually read this you'll find that you have heard a majority of this poem before. This is because it is the edited version of A Dream of Jane's. So sit back and enjoy the edited more intense, more pollished version... See Jane Run


It doesn’t seem right
you should have some of my height
But when you give me the ball
You make me feel tall

So here I am at the beginning of the story
Hoping it will end in guts and glory
With a dragon and a hero
Saving a princess who felt like a zero

I look forward a few pages
But there are no pictures
Only morals never told by the ages
So I sit back and I think
Grabbing my highlighter that’s pink

You have full faith in me
But no one else feels my glee
So I keep on reading
Hoping everything will come stampeding

But will things be right
When you have some of my height
Dick, you could weigh a ton
And that’s when you’ll see Jane run
That's when you'll see Jane run.

2 comments:

Iz said...

actually i like this one better. It makes you stop and think about the words and it has more feeling to it. Good edits and awesomely awesome poem baby!
im glad everythings cool
LOVE YOU sooo freggin muchhhhh
love,
iz

Jules said...

This is amazing, and you are amazing. AKA you rock. AKA I love you!!!!!!